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PostSubject: Ragnar/Izanagi   Sat Jun 08, 2013 1:14 am

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Name: Ragnar/Izanagi
Age: 20
True Age: 27/Izanagi - Unknown
Sex: Male
Personality: Ragnar is a serious, calm, and collected young man. He is able to keep calm in many situations, battle including. Even after being fused with Izanagi, Ragnar has kept this personality, but now talks to himself, as he is actually talking to Izanagi. Ragnar, when not in battle, is the dominant one in charge of the body, so he takes care of meeting people, and explaining his situation to them.

Ragnar has no qualms with killing, even if it is another human. He fights for his own beliefs, and his own sense of right and wrong. He will even fight friends if they get in his way. He seeks a kind of peace, his own personal peace. His peace is the fact that he doesn't want to fight anymore, but Ragnar knows that this is impossible. So, he fights to make the impossible, possible.

Ragnar and Izanagi get along quite well, considering the consequences of their bonding. At first, they didn't, but slowly, over time, the two armed up to each other, and help each other any time they can. Though, Izanagi does keep some things to himself, in order for Ragnar to learn things on his own.

Izanagi is the Japanese God of creation, and the "father", of Amaterasu, the sun goddess, Tsukuyomi, the moon god, and Susanoo, the god of storms, and tempests. He is a proud, serious, but caring individual. He is also calm, but not as much as Ragnar. Izanagi controls the body during combat, and is usually silent during it. He doesn't believe in needlessly taunting his opponent, and hates it if one of his comrades does it.

Izanagi hates Sinners, no matter who they are. They are the opposite of what he is, and he believes they should be completely eradicated. He will tell Ragnar to fight them on the spot, and gets angry at Ragnar if he refuses. Izanagi is also wary of Shinigami, and their Soul King. He has heard of what the Soul King has done to the other "deities", and does not want that to happen to him. Thus, he keeps a low profile during battle, especially if a Shinigami is involved.
Likes:
Ragnar: Peace, hanging around people he likes, and fighting for peace
Izanagi: Fighting evil, killing sinners, taking care of Zero
Fears:
Ragnar: Believing he hasn't fought hard enough, losing Izanagi, needless violence
Izanagi: The Soul King, Being separated from Zero, Having his memories taken away

Character Appearance



Height: 5'10"
Weight: 195 Lbs
Physical Traits: He is a young adult with white spiky hair and heterochromia: his left eye being green and his right being red, a side effect from assimilating Izanagi.

Clothing: Ragnar's clothing consists of a hybrid of modern, futuristic and old features. He wears a vibrant red sleeved jacket with two long thin tails hanging from the back. He wears the jacket half off, with the right side hanging off. Under it is a black shirt with three red belts and also several belts covering his right arm. He wears a pair of black gloves with a red shell on the backs of the hands. He wears a black hakama and steel-toed red boots.
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Fighting Style



General Fighting Style: Ragnar is a melee specialist, preferring the use of spears when he is in his Amaterasu, and Tsukuyomi modes. He has incredible strength, easily breaking cement with his bare hands. Ragnar has also trained his hand-to-hand combat, and is almost as good without weapons, as he is with them. He is also incredibly quick, easily keeping up with Shunpo users. Because of Izanagi, Ragnar's Spiritual Pressure is enormous as well. He is able to continue to use moves long after others of his tier can.
Strengths:
Physical Strength
Speed
Hand-to-Hand Combat
Spiritual Pressure
Spear Master
Immortality: Being the vessel for a god, Ragnar is immune to disease, and does not age further than he is right now. He can still "Die" but not by natural causes. He does not need to eat or drink like a human does though he can do so if he wishes. He does not need to use the bathroom or even sleep, though to make time pass he sleeps anyways.
Weaknesses:
Sensing
While in Amaterasu mode, Water/Ice based attacks do 50% more damage
While in Tsukuyomi mode, Fire based attacks do 50% more damage


Primary Stage


Due to Izanagi becoming an intricate part of Ragnar, Ragnar has two forms for battles. One is his Sun form, based on Amaterasu, the sun goddess, and Tsukuyomi, the moon god. Ragnar also has access to the powers of the tempest/storm god, Susanoo. His sun powers can only be used during times when the sun is present in the sky, and his moon powers can only be used during times when the moon is in the sky. Susanoo is available at all times, as a back-up.

Amaterasu Form

While in Amaterasu mode, Izanagi's spear is named Masamune.

Ability Name: Solar Flare
Description: By absorbing energy directly from the sun, Izanagi becomes capable of firing a massive, and extreme line of flame for up to 15 feet in front of him. 3 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Photosynthesis
Description: For 3 posts, Izanagi can absorb the sun, to heal his wounds. Naturally, he could only heal minor wounds within that time. 4 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Solar Shield
Description: Izanagi crafts a shield around him, capable of blocking up to a Gran Rey Cero. It surrounds Izanagi. It can last for 3 posts, and if he keeps it up for a post, 3 post cd, if he holds it up for 2 posts, 4 post cd, and for the final 3rd post, 5 post cool-down

Ability Name: Sun Flares
Description: Izanagi summons up to 6 globes of intense flames, as if from the sun. They are as fast, and powerful as a Cero, and explode on contact. 5 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Sun Spears
Description: Izanagi can create a spear made out of the same flames for everything else. It looks like his own spear. He can fight with it, in a dual spear style of fighting, or he can throw it, which causes a blast as powerful as a Gran Rey. 3 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Solar Flash
Description: Izanagi makes a flash of pure light, severely decreasing the sight of his opponent. It lasts for one post, with a 2 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Heat Vision
Description: Izanagi can shoot pure heat energy out of his eyes. It is as fast, and as powerful as a Cero.

Ability Name: Amaterasu Blast
Description: Izanagi blasts his opponent with a short range, but powerful blast of pure heat up to 10 feet. It is as powerful as a Gran Rey, and has a 3 post cool-down.

Tsukuyomi Form

While in Tsukuyomi form, Izanagi's spear is named Muramasa.

Ability Name: Dance of the Moon
Description: Izanagi creates an artificial moon in the sky, and uses it's light to scatter dozens of energy blades, up to 50, across a small area of about 10 feet around Izanagi. Lasts for 3 posts, and has a 1 post cool-down for 10 blades, 2 post cool-down for 20 blades, up to a 5 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Moon Slash
Description: Izanagi absorb's the moon's power, and transfers it into his spear. He swings it, and creates a Cero-powered wave of energy.

Ability Name: Night Vision (Passive)
Description: Izanagi has perfect night vision, able to see like it was day.

Ability Name: Moonlight Shield
Description: Izanagi creates a shield on his left arm, in a circular shape. The shield can withstand up to a Gran Rey Cero, and can stay on his arm for up to 4 posts. 3 post cool-down which starts when it is destroyed, or finished.

Ability Name: Muramasa Slash
Description: Izanagi charges energy into his spear, sharpening it incredibly. While active, a white aura stays around the head of the spear. It last for 4 posts. 4 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Moonlit Meteor
Description: Using the moon as a catalyst, Izanagi pulls a meteor from out of the sky, and aims it at his opponent. Very difficult to control, but extremely damaging if it hits. 6 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Moonlight Strike
Description: Izanagi can absorb the moon's energy, and store it in his body. When he feels the need is right, he releases it as a blast of energy. 5 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Moonlit Heal
Description: Izanagi absorb's the moon's energy, and uses it to heal himself. The healing happens over three posts, and only heals minor wounds. 4 post cool-down.

Susanoo Abilities (Active All the Time)

Ability Name: Storm Flash
Description: Izanagi summons four feet long bolts of lightning, one for each hand. He can instantly reload them after throwing them. They pack a powerful impact, and piercing ability, but are no more powerful than a Hado 4.

Ability Name: Lightning Flash
Description: Izanagi is able to become pure lightning, and teleport from place to place up to a range of about 300 yards. He can only do it once a post, with a 4 post cool-down.

Ability Name: Lightning God Slash
Description: Binding lightning into a swing of his spear, Izanagi releases a concentrated slice of lightning straight at an opponent.

Ability Name: Vortex
Description: Izanagi summons 4 F2 tornadoes to attack his opponent/s. They are slow, but continually hound their target/s. 2 post duration, 5 post cool-down.

Boosts:


Hyper Mode


While in Hyper Mode, Izanagi becomes the dominant personality. He becomes his true form, and is now known as Izanagi-no-Okami. He can now use his Amaterasu, and Tsukuyomi powers in conjunction with each other.


Ability Name: Godly Totem
Description: Izanagi summons a monolith made of rock. It only stays up for 3 posts. but, for those 3 posts, all of Izanagi's abilities cool-downs are cut down by 1. 6 post cool-down.

Ability Name: God-Like Barrier
Description: Izanagi creates a barrier, of white energy. It surrounds him like a bubble, and is capable of stopping up to a Cero Oscuras in power. 3 post duration, 5 post cool-down. (Cannot block Final Attacks)

Ability Name: Summoning of the Gods
Description: Izanagi can summon the phantom representations of his three "children", Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi, and Susanoo. they last for 3 posts, and are 4 tiers lower than Izanagi.
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Ability Name: God's Blast
Description: Izanagi's most powerful attack, he shoots a huge blast of energy at an opponent. It is as powerful as 2 Cero Oscuras. If it hits the fight is done. Izanagi's is also in fatigue state after this attack, and can barely move.

Boosts: Strength X3 Speed X3

Back Drop

Background: Ragnar was born into a laboratory to scientists wishing to create a perfect vessel for a spirit they had captured. He was Subject Zero, the first, and most successful of the subjects, of which there were 46. He grew up in a tightly controlled environment, of which he felt there was no escape. He had conditional training, in order to bond with the spirit much more smoothly. He was singled out based on his best attributes: his skill with hand-to-hand combat, his speed, his strength, and his ability with a spear. He was the only one to bond with the spear, which was the spirits main weapon. As he grew, Subject Zero became increasingly higher in placement for the bonding process. And so, when it became time to bond the spirit, he was chosen almost immediately. After 20 years, Ragnar finally saw his chance at freedom. If he could bond with the spirit, he could bust out of the lab in which he was trained for most of his life. He could be free.

The bonding process was incredibly painful. But successful. Ragnar had bonded with the spirit. After he awoke from the procedure, Ragnar realized he wasn't alone inside of his own head. When the spirit spoke, it sounded like thunder in Ragnar's mind. The spirit introduced itself as Izanagi, a so-called god of the ancient Japanese. He was captured years before, and subjected to tests by the same scientists who had made Ragnar the shell in which Izanagi now resided. With the both of them having reasons to escape, the waited until Ragnar had regained his full strength. After about 2 days, they busted out, Ragnar now using Izanagi's power to augment his own. After running from the lab, Ragnar soon found out where he was. Russia. he soon found passage out of what he believed to be his home country, and found himself as a mercenary for hire because of his skills. Learning several different languages over the next couple of years, Ragnar became more, and more attached to Izanagi, finally willing to let the fallen god control his body during battles. Now, at 27 years of age, Ragnar is still a mercenary, but is growing sick of the jobs he is getting. Fast.
Side Notes: Though he thinks it, Ragnar was not born in Russia. Unknown to him, and to all the test subjects, the labs were moved multiple times to keep their project on the down low. It is unknown where Ragnar was born, but, as he escaped into Russia, he considers it his "birthplace".
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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Fri Jan 31, 2014 11:21 pm

You need more weaknesses. And Immortality isn't a weakness.

Solar Shield should probably have a scale on the cooldown, depending how long you keep it up. Like, just keep it up for a post, 3 post cd, hold it up for 2 posts, 4 post cd, etc. Also, is it just from one direction or does it surround you?

Define short range on the Amaterasu Blast.

Dance of the Moon, I need an exact count and a cooldown. It's similar to Yuri's Seikon Todomoe, so I'd recommend a cooldown on a scale based on how many is fired.

Moonlight Shield should probably have a longer cooldown due to how long it lasts...unless that cooldown starts when the shield is destroyed/time limit reached...

Muramasa Slash I'm not sure what to make of it...examples of power or something please?

Lightning Flash, range?

Vortex, seven might be a bit much, even if they're slow moving...I might be fine with 4 though...

Godly Totem, I don't think so. Most I'd go is by one cd.

Summoning of the Gods, I need how much lower are their tiers in relation to yours and how long they last on the field. And CD.

God's Blast, I realize it's a last resort, but I do need power. They're often at least a couple of hado 90 somethings in strength.

That's all I have.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Tue Feb 04, 2014 7:15 pm

Edited.
Also, Muramasa Slash just makes it sharper. It isn't an energy blast. It just ups the cutting power on his spear.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Fri Feb 07, 2014 8:18 pm

Please classify Immortality as a quirk or put it in strengths. It's still under weaknesses.

Speaking of, either add another weakness, or make his weakness to those types of attacks greater than what they are. I would recommend closer to 50%...possibly more since technically only two of those weaknesses are active at a time.

On Amaterasu blast, I would recommend increasing that range closer to ten feet...and if Zenke agrees, I'd also lower that cooldown to two considering its range is so much less than a traditional Gran Rey leveled attack.

Dance of the moon seems very underpowered compared to Yuri's move, which is for every 10 holy energy swords, there is a 1 post cd, up to 50 energy swords. And they last for 3 posts. Though the area isn't as concentrated. If you wish to make it closer to Yuri's in strength, be my guest.

Lightning Flash, I would again recommend increasing its range, especially for that cooldown...possibly up to 300 yards or so...

I would recommend decreasing the summonings tier down four tiers lower than you, considering there are three of them and have access to their respective abilities (I'm assuming).

That's all I have. Only the two things, with the rest recommendations to buff.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Mon Feb 10, 2014 4:38 pm

BLAM! Differences made.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Mon Feb 10, 2014 10:13 pm

just a note on Lightning flash, I said YARDS, not feet...huge difference between 300 feet and 300 yards (which is 900 feet). Just saying.

Even if you make that change, you have your first approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Thu Feb 20, 2014 7:22 pm

Sun flares: 6 cero? could use a bigger cooldown.

Thats it, i think.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Thu Feb 20, 2014 7:24 pm

Done.

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PostSubject: Re: Ragnar/Izanagi   Thu Feb 20, 2014 7:25 pm

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