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PostSubject: Abel Ryūkōtei   Abel Ryūkōtei EmptyWed Feb 15, 2012 2:53 am

Basic Information


Name: Abel Ryūkōtei
Age: Around 23-27
True Age: 396
Sex: Male
Personality: Abel is a serious man, understanding that some situations require it. He is quiet, and tends to stick to himself, and close friends. He is almost the exact opposite of his older brother, Parius. He does share their love for a good fight though. He shows proper respect to anyone, even his opponents. Abel also has a strong sense of right and wrong, and is ferocious against those he deems evil, mainly Sinners. Inside of battle, he is a spur of the moment man, barely using strategy. He also tends to smile in battle. He also is ruthless, aiming to kill his opponents, unless it is a spar.

Around his friends, Abel smiles more than usual, and has been known to crack a joke. He is likable, but he hides it, so that he can get his job done. Around his brother, he is somewhat more mischievous. He also smiles alot more. He doesn't exactly judge people. If he knows who they are, though, he will go by that, and react accordingly.

Abel does like to help those in need of it, whether they want it, or not. It usually has to happen right in front of him. He knows that sometimes, he won't always make it, but those times he does, it is always a good feeling. Abel also isn't good with woman, having the same problem as Parius. They do not usually fight women. However, Parius is more lenient on that rule. Abel only does it, in emergencies, or if the Captain Commander says to.
Likes: His job, meditating, helping those in need, a good battle.
Fears: Evil people, Anyone harming his friends, or family, his own weakness.


Character Appearance


Height: 6 feet exactly
Weight: 125
Physical Traits: Abel has Shoulder-length, black hair, that he cut from his first hair style. He has blue eyes, and usually has a serious look on his face.
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Clothing: Abel forgoes the usual Shinigami uniform, wearing a unique costume, made specifically for the Chitose Clan. He also has a necklace, though it isn't the same as Parius's. It has more of a Celtic design.
Link to costume: http://www.cosplay365buy.com/images/201012/goods_img/3708_G_1292577816643.jpg
Accessories:

Fighting Style


General Fighting Style: Having usually fought with Parius as a kid, alot of Abel's strong points are the same. Abel is a quick fighter, preferring a many small hits, compared to one huge hit. He is a blade specialist, but also has knowledge of other weapons. He is also good with Kido.
Strengths: Abel's strengths lie in Shunpo, and the way of the blade
Weaknesses: Abel cannot sense Rietsu very good. Unless you completely release it, he will not sense it. He is also a spur of the moment tactics guy. He doesn't plan ahead, and always live's for the moment.

Zanpakuto & Kidou


Sealed Appearance:
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Spirit’s Name: Suishou Kibou (Crystal Hope)
Spirit’s Appearance:
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Suishou has long, white hair, and beautiful blue eyes. She wears a white dress, with a pendant, that has a blue gem in it. She is smaller than Abel, by a foot.
Spirit’s Personality: Suishou is a bit laid back, and always calm. She likes to tease Abel every once and a while, but she does care for him. She doesn't like fighting all that much, but she does it anyway, only because she knows Abel needs her.
Inner World: Suishou lives in a grand mansion, painted white, with a big garden full of different flowers. There are alot of different rooms, but the place feels weird, mostly because no one else is there. The room where Suishou is usually found has a piano in it.
Kidou:

Hado:
Spell #: 4 Spell Name: Byakurai (Pale Lightning)
Spell Information: The user fires a concentrated, powerful lightning bolt from their finger.
Incantation: unknown.

Spell #: 11 Spell Name: Tsuzuri Raiden (Bound Lightning)
Spell Information: Electric current flows through any object the user touches and is able to lead electricity, damaging any target that is in contact with the object the current runs through.
Incantation: unknown

Spell #: 31 Spell Name: Shakkahō (Shot of Red Fire)
Spell Information: Fires a ball of red energy at a target.
Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!"

Shikai


Call Out Command: Come to me, Suishou Kibou
Appearance:
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His blade grows what appears to be bone. It is actually Adamant. It glows, as if made of crystal. The blade itself is around 4 feet long.
Abilities:

1:Adamant Barrage: Abel swings his blade, summoning up to six shards of adamant. They fly at their opponent. They are the strength, and speed of Bala.

2:Crystal Shield:Abel summons a white barrier around him, blocking any attack for 1 post. The power of the attack must be at least a Cero to break it. If it breaks, it causes 50% damage. Cool-down is 1 post.

3:Lightning Spear: Abel summons a spear, made of lightning. It's a ranged weapon, and is as powerful as a Cero. Cool-down 1 post.

4:Lightning Augmentation.:Abel merges lightning with his blade, giving it electrified swings. It amplifies his damage by 2. It lasts for up to 4 posts. Cool-down 4 posts.

5:Lightning Strike: Abel fires a concentrated beam of lightning, and is one of his strongest attacks. It is as powerful as 2 Ceros. Cool-down 3 posts. The power is also augmented by the Lightning augment. Cool-down is 2 posts.
Boosts: Abel's speed increases, as does his durability. His strength somewhat increses, but not by much. He also fights longer.
Speed X2 Durability X2 Endurance X2 Strength X1.5

Bankai


New Name: Saishuuteki Suishou Kibou (Final Crystal Hope)
Appearance: Abel loses his suit, instead gaining white pants, and a white, tight, sleeveless shirt. His arms have crystal tattoos, spreading wildly all over his arms. He gains a crystal wing, on his left shoulder. His hair moves wildly also, gaining white tips. His blade transforms, into this:Abel Ryūkōtei Frostm10
Abilities: He keeps all of his former abilities, but they are powered up, X2

1:Creationist Bolt: A thin beam, made of lightning. It is as powerful as a Cero, but it cuts through you. He points at you, and it fires. Cool-down 2 posts.

2:Crystal Bomb: Abel summons a crystal, about the size of a football, and he throws it at his enemies. After three seconds, it explodes, dealing shrapnel, and lighting damage. It is as powerful as 2 Cero's. Cool-down 3 posts.

3:Crystal God Blast: Abel summons everything he has, and fires it, in a singular blast. It is his last resort move, and will immediately place him back into fatigued/unconcious/barely awake for the rest of the thread. It deals massive damage, enough to horribly wound any opponent. The damage is still layered, by tier. It takes 2 posts to charge.


Boosts: Speed X3 Stamina X2 Durability X3 Strength X2

Toukai

Name: [A greater variation of the bankai name. most likely sounds cooler.]
New Appearance: [You are one with your zanpaktou. Your appearance will most likely mirror a fusion between you and your zanpaktou spirit. What does this amazing new form look like?]
Abilities: [These are your bankai powers at a new height of god-like potential ( without being god mod )]
Boosts: [Being in this state puts your bankai boosts at x4]

Back Drop


Background: Abel was born, after Parius. They grew up, and were great with each other. They taught each other how to fight, as Abel was in them almost every day. They fought from time to time, but they cared about each other. Abel soon grew to be the serious one, but he still knew how to laugh, and have a bit of fun. Then, Parius died. Abel dropped out of school for a couple of years, before finding his drive, in a girl. He met her one night in a bar, and they hit it off. This new relationship blossomed, convincing Abel to go back to school, and finish his degree. During his time alive, Abel got the family to the wealth known today. He did not know what would happen in Saisei's time, though. Abel lived very well, and had 1 child. The heir, that would continue, and end in Saisei. Abel died very late in his 30's, leaving the family to his wife, and child.

He was soon brought to the Soul Society, and became somewhat stable. He had a job, delivering packages to people. Abel really didn't like the job, as he wasn't good at socializing, but it payed good. He had no idea that Parius was also in this world, working as a blacksmith. Abel actually delivered some stuff to that smithy, but Parius wasn't there. Abel dreamed of becoming a Soul Reaper someday. However, it would take many years, then he joined the Soul Society, a week after Parius gained his Vizard powers, and left the entire place. He also learned that Parius had enrolled in the same school. He had a reputation to live up to.

He trained, becoming better each day, and soon graduated, near the top of his class. He was given a patrol job, which he did take. It was a start. It was a boring couple of months, but then, a Hollow attacked. In the same area as where Parius first used his own Rietsu. Most of his squad was killed, but Abel managed to kill the Hollow, but he was badly injured in the process. He healed, and was promoted soon after. He still feels like the attack was failed, as people died.

Abel never truly got over the Hollow attack. He still blamed himself. So, he hid his pain away, from even his closest friends. He did some comfort, in the fact that there had been multiple sightings of his brother. As long as that last link to his human life was alive, Abel could continue to live, and do the best he can. He soon learned of who Parius's captain was. Jensen Reinhart. He set out to join that Squad, and find out what exactly happened to his older brother.
Side Notes: Yep. Another Ryūkōtei. XD I also have the permission of Zenke to use Jensen in my Background.
RP Sample: https://bleacherax.rpg-board.net/t509-no-one-here-oh-nvm


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PostSubject: Re: Abel Ryūkōtei   Abel Ryūkōtei EmptyWed Feb 15, 2012 10:12 pm

Lightning Strike:

returning to your base form after using this is a bit much. You'd be fine with a 3 post cooldown.

Crystal Bomb: How strong?

I see nothing else.


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PostSubject: Re: Abel Ryūkōtei   Abel Ryūkōtei EmptyWed Feb 15, 2012 10:43 pm

I have done as you asked, Master. XD
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PostSubject: Re: Abel Ryūkōtei   Abel Ryūkōtei EmptyThu Feb 16, 2012 1:42 am

Approved. Looks good for 2-1, yes?
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PostSubject: Re: Abel Ryūkōtei   Abel Ryūkōtei EmptyFri Feb 17, 2012 4:33 pm

You have a very odd problem. Some of your abilities, again, are underpowered. Like that Crystal Shield. It doesn't need that big a cooldown nor a thread limit. One post cooldown is enough.

Lightning Spear, no thread limit is necessary. And cooldown again, is maybe one post. Probably none would work.

Lightning augmentation I need to know how much it increases the power of your swings/inceases power of your abilities. And again, no thread limit is necessary.

Lightning Strike, thread limit is not needed, get rid of it. You're putting too severe of limits on your abilities. Cooldown could be lowered to two.

Crystal bomb, no thread limit.

For a last resort move...Crystal God Blast is is pathetic. Easily the weakest one out there. Put in that you are fatigued/unconcious/barely awake for the rest of the thread, and that it will kill or put your opponent out of the fight if it hits. Then it will be a true Last Resort move. Still maybe a little weak, considering it's one big linear blast, but if you catch someone off guard, it'll do it's business. Oh, and a one to two post charge time before you can fire it. But be known that you can still move around while you're charging it.

Then I will second with a 2-1 with bankai.
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PostSubject: Re: Abel Ryūkōtei   Abel Ryūkōtei EmptyFri Feb 17, 2012 5:16 pm

I have done as you asked.
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